I hope when people read my age-gap romance the find the dialogue funny, honest, and realistic.
Here's a snippet, what do you think?
I turned to Maria. “So, what’s the score with you and Rich?”
Maria laughed. “What? Me and Rich?”
The alcohol making me forget my earlier promise, I said, “Yeah, he likes you.”
Maria’s eyes widened and her body went ridged. “Seriously?”
“That’s what he said to me earlier. But shit-” The memory came flooding back. “I wasn’t supposed to say anything.”
“Oopsie,” Kelly interjected, and we all started giggling.