Again, thanks for all the comments yesterday on C is for Coven. I'm flattered so many people are interested in my novel.
Today we take a look at the triplets' mum, Dawn. Enjoy.
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"We want to know more about our mother," Esmee said. Just behind her stood Maggie and Nola. All three of them had hopeful expressions on their faces. "Can you tell us about her?"
"I
can do one better than that," said Betty. "I can show you."
"You mean with my empathy? Like when you gave me the locket?"
"Yes. Exactly like that. You'll need to be touching both me and your sisters for it to work though."
"You mean with my empathy? Like when you gave me the locket?"
"Yes. Exactly like that. You'll need to be touching both me and your sisters for it to work though."
The
four of them gathered around the dining room table. Betty held out her hand, palm up and Esmee covered it with one hand. Esmee
laid her other hand on the table for her sisters to cover with their
own hands.
Esmee
felt the power wash through her and then the images started
assaulting her mind. She heard Maggie gasp, before the present faded away and became engulfed by the past.
Betty,
looking younger - her hair no longer streaked in grey and the lines
absent from her face - sat upright in a hospital bed. A doctor
approached her.
"I'm
pleased to announce you have a daughter."
The
doctor passed a bundle swaddled in a yellow blanket into Betty's
waiting arms.
She
looked down at the baby, just minutes old, and smiled. She had a
faint cap of red hair that was soft and downy to the touch. The baby
yawned and opened it's eyes for the first time. Already they were bright green; just like her father's.
"He
will love you as much as I do when he sees you," Betty said to
the baby.
"And
what shall we name you? Names are very important." She gazed
down at her daughter again, gently fingering the hospital
identification tag looped around her left leg.
On
the tag, in the midwife's neat handwriting, was the date and time of
her daughter's birth.
'Friday,
June 20th, 1969. 6:37 am.'
"Born
on the dawn of the summer solstice," Betty said affectionately.
"Dawn, yes, that is the perfect name for you."
**
Betty
stood at the sink, washing the lunch dishes. Through the open window
she could see and hear Dawn playing on the swing set in the garden.
Her giggles filled the air as she pumped her legs harder, and flew
higher.
Betty
noticed the higher Dawn swung the more she seemed to glow. At first
she thought it was the sunlight reflecting off her. But as
Dawn squealed in delight, and light radiated from her,
illuminating the whole garden, Betty realised what was going on.
Dawn's
magical powers, which she was sure to have as both her mother and
father were witches, were manifesting. Betty was surprised, as magical powers normally surfaced in a child's teens, but Dawn's were emerging at just ten-years-old.
Realising
what was happening, Dawn jumped from the swing and ran across the
garden to the back door. Betty was waiting on the doorstep for her.
"Mama,
I'm glowing!" she said proudly.
"Yes
you are."
"Is
this my magical ability? Like yours and Daddy's"
"It
is. But first I have to take you to a special doctor, just to make sure."
"What
will they do to me?"
"Just
a few tests my dear. It will be fine, I promise."
**
Betty
and a bored looking Dawn sat on grey plastic seats in a white corridor.
Dawn swung her legs, that were clad in bright yellow Wellington boots,
backwards and forwards in time with the ticking of a nearby clock.
"When
will Mr. Yarwood be back?"
"Soon
sweetheart. Soon."
As
if summoned by the mention of his name, the door opposite to where
Dawn and Betty were sitting opened, and Mr. Yarwood, the PID agent
who had assessed Dawn earlier, emerged.
"Please,
come into my office."
Betty
lead Dawn into Mr. Yarwood's office and they both sat on chairs opposite him,
separated from by a large oak desk.
"We
have Dawn's test results," he said. "Your daughter has the
ability to generate light that radiates from her body. The highest
temperature we were able to record was equal to a hundred watt light
bulb. Though it seems your daughter possesses a second ability that
protects her from her own power, and she does not receive any burns
from the energy she expels. Of course, she will need to be properly
trained to use her ability, and as she matures brought into a coven.
But I trust you and your husband can do all of that through your own
coven. All that we require is that Dawn signs in once a month, to the
agent you and your coven report to."
"Yes,
that's fine. We can do that, can't we Dawn?"
"Yup!"
she smiled at Mr. Yarwood as her skin glowed brightly.
"She
really is a lovely little girl. A joy to have around. I wish you and
your daughter all the best for the future."
"Thank
you," Betty said.
**
"I
really thought he was different," Dawn sobbed. She was older
now, in her late teens. Her red hair was cut into a striking pixie
cut that showed off her high cheek bones.
Betty
sat at the end of her bed, rubbing her daughter's leg comfortingly. Two untouched mugs of hot chocolate stood on the bedside table.
"He
didn't care about me though. He said we're too young to be settling
down, and that me coming to stay with him was a mistake. Daddy was
right all along."
"I'm
sorry, darling. I wish there was something I could do to make you
feel better."
"Blast
him with a bolt of lightning?"
Betty
chuckled.
"I'm
afraid not. Besides, the fact - "
"I
know. It's not right to use magic to hurt someone else. And I don't
want to hurt him, not really. I just want to forget I ever met him."
"Time
is the greatest healer. Just give yourself a chance to get over the
pain."
Dawn
nodded. "Is Dad still mad?"
"Not
now that you've come home."
"I
should tell him I'm sorry and that he was right."
"That
can wait. Just rest up first. You've had a long day."
"Hopefully a good night's sleep will make me forget I ever liked
Timothy Whelan."
"I'm sure
it will. Sweet dreams, darling." Betty kissed Dawn on the
forehead and tucked her into bed. Sometimes, no matter how old, a
child still needed their mother.
**
"He's
not coming back, is he?" Dawn sobbed. She was little older than
the last vision, though her hair had grown out to her jaw. She
was curled up in ball, in an armchair.
"I'm sorry my dear. I'm
afraid your father is gone," Betty said, her own cheeks stained
with tears.
"What
happened to him?"
"His
powers overwhelmed him. He wasn't able to control them."
"Did
he suffer? Was he in any pain?"
"I don't think so. His power's consumed him. He's in a better place now."
Dawn
sniffed and nodded her head. "I understand."
Mother
and daughter lapsed into silence, and after a few moments Dawn rose
from her chair, crossed the room and climbed onto the sofa next to
Betty. Dawn crawled into her mother's lap, and Betty started to
gently stroke her hair.
**
"Mum!
Mum!" Dawn called, entering the darkened house. More time had
passed since the last vision. Dawn's hair was long again, reaching
her waist, and was currently tied in a single braid.
She
waited in the hallway for her mother to appear. "I have some
wonderful news."
Betty
came rushing down the stairs of their home.
"What
is it, sweetheart?"
"Finn
proposed!"
Dawn
flashed the diamond engagement ring that was on her left hand. Betty
didn't know what was brighter, the glitter of the gemstone or the
light radiating from her jubilant daughter.
"Congratulations."
**
The
house was decorated for the wedding, and the guests were due to
arrive in half an hour. Betty made her way upstairs to Dawn's bedroom
and knocked on the door gently.
“Come
in.”
Dawn
was sat at the dresser, in front of the mirror, braiding a lock of
hair on her right hand side. On the left another lock was braided and
pinned behind her ear. The rest of her long hair was down and
slightly wavy.
“Shall
I help you with that?”
Dawn
nodded and Betty crossed the room and continued to braid her
daughter's hair. It had been almost ten years since she'd last done
this.
“I
wish Dad could be here.”
“He'd
be very proud of you, and I'm sure he'd tell you how beautiful you
look.”
“Thank
you.” Dawn glowed, but for the first time in years, it wasn't due
to her magical ability.
**
Dawn
sat on the sofa, her hand curled around a yellow mug of camomile tea,
her stomach swollen with three babies who were due to make their
first appearance in the world in just a few weeks.
Betty
sat on the opposite end of the couch, also drinking camomile tea.
“Mum,
quick. Come feel. One of the triplets is kicking.”
Betty
laid her hand on Dawn's stomach as a foot kicked sharply.
“That
one's going to have real spirit.”
**
Betty
gently pushed open the hospital door.
Sitting
up in bed was Dawn, her hair pinned back and her eyes heavy, as she
gazed down at the three babies nestled in her lap.
Betty
approached her daughter and granddaughters.
Each
baby was the spitting image of Dawn when she was born. Their tiny
heads covered in downy red hair.
“They're
beautiful Dawn. I'm so proud of you.”
Dawn
beamed. “Thank you. I couldn't have done it without you, Mum.”
**
Betty
withdrew her hand, tears running freely down her cheeks. She looked
to Maggie, Nola and Esmee. All three of them had tears in their own
eyes.
"You
three are the best of her. Nola, you have her strength of spirit.
Maggie you have her bright intelligence. Esmee you have her warm
heart. She would be so proud of you now."
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A-Z Index.
What a great insight into Dawn's life! It's cool that, even though her daughters didn't know her, they still got to see some of the most important events in her life. :D
ReplyDeleteThank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, I think it's important the triplets got to see their mum. :)
DeleteWhat a terrific way to introduce Dawn to her daughters. And I love the pictures you've selected, they form the perfect image of Dawn and really went with your piece.
ReplyDeleteThank you. Glad you enjoyed it. :D
ReplyDeleteSuch a lovely Dawn :)
ReplyDeleteLoving your challenge run…
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DeleteGreat piece and really nice pics to go with it!
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteShe sounds like an amazing character :)
ReplyDeleteI love this! And the picture of her in her wedding dress is beautiful. You really made me feel like I got to know her.
ReplyDeleteThank you for you comment. I'm so pleased to hear you enjoyed it, and felt like you got to know Dawn. :)
DeleteBrilliant. Your writing is so vivid ! Feels like I got to experience all of Dawns' life along with her.
ReplyDeleteThank you! :D I'm pleased you're still enjoying my A-Z, and found my writing so vivid that you felt like you were experiencing Dawn's life along with her. :D
DeleteYes...names are so important! Good writing....and the photos are perfect to depict Dawn's growth and maturity. Enjoy the challenge...
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments. :D
DeleteI can't believe I missed this one! I love this post; you get a real feel for Dawns life through the years. :)
ReplyDeleteNo worries. Life gets busy. Thanks for the comment, glad you enjoyed it.
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