Once again thank you all for the comments on B is For Betty Leahey. Your support and interest in my novel is greatly appreciated.
Today I bring you another scene from Sibylline Nights. Enjoy.
The
group muttered their assertions of thanks, and one-by-one sat down at
the table, with Betty at the head.
Her
eyes flicked around the table, noting faces that were still new to
her, as she counted in her head how many were there.
"Thirteen.
The perfect coven."
"What
do we do now?" Maggie, who was sitting closest to her
grandmother, peered over seeking leadership.
"There
are a number of things we need to do first, like setting up wards and
making sure the PID don't find us."
She
rose from her chair and headed to a cupboard on the far side of the
room.
From
the cupboard she withdrew a large brown cardboard box and carried it
to the table. Maggie, who was
sitting closest to her and ever curious, peered into the box. She
rummaged around for a few moments before pulling out a yellow candle.
"What
are these for?"
"Casting
different types of wards. First we're going to need one to guard us
from the PID." Betty sat back down and withdrew from the box
blue and white candles, as well as a handful of smooth gemstones in
sandy hues and shades of grey, and then a second, these ones rougher
and coloured violet. "Agate and Lepidolite for protection."
Rising
from her seat again, Betty walked around the edge of the room,
placing gemstones and candles at random intervals as she went.
"Form
a circle in the centre of the room." Everyone began rising from
the table to do as they were told. "Although we all have our own
individual abilities, every witch has innate magical energy. If we
channel that power with the right gemstones, candles and words, we
can create powerful wards."
They
group formed a circle in the centre of the room, leaving a gap in the
northern position for Betty herself.
"What
about me?" Sebastian looked up meekly, out of place amongst
twelve witches. "I have no magical abilities."
"Not
strictly speaking you don't. However you can still add your energy to
the ward."
"My
energy? How? The PID taught us that your abilities come from a
genetic abnormality."
"Abnormality?"
Betty raised an eyebrow.
"I'm
sorry. Damn it. It's what the senior agents call it. I didn't mean to
offend you."
"Non
taken. What they say is true in part, but not the whole story.
The PID try to explain everything with science. It runs deeper than their understanding though. Magical energy exists in everyone and everything. However there are
some people born with a genetic advancement that allows them to
channel this energy in various ways."
"What
dictates who has an ability?" Maggie called over, intrigued by
the conversation between her grandmother and Sebastian. "Biology
and DNA. In most cases the gene that allows as person to preform
magic is hereditary, and you usually find that people in the same
family have similar or interlinking abilities."
"Like
me, Esmee and Nola? Our abilities are all mental based to varying
degrees."
"Exactly!"
She addressed the group as a whole. "Everyone join hands and
repeat after me."
Betty
stood tall and proud, with her arms raised to the skies. Her
expression changed and her eyes became focused on some unseen object
in the distance.
When
she spoke her voice wasn't its usual soft warm tone, but commanding
like that of a motivational speaker.
"Power
of the astral plane, I call on you now."
The
others repeated Betty's words. Some, like Georgina with the
confidence of a person who had done this sort of thing before, and
others, like Nola, a little sceptically.
"Spirits
I call on you and ask for your protection."
The
air around them crackled with static electricity. One of the candles
flickered and went out. Sebastian jumped slightly.
"Guard
this warehouse and all who dwell here from harm. "
For
an instant the warehouse was washed with a pale blue light. Every
sound in the room ceased, and silence descended for a moment.
"Protect
those within from danger."
The
group copied Betty, those who had seemed sceptical at first now
displaying the same vigour as the others. Only Sebastian still looked
unsure, though he was speaking along.
"I
command you now will all my power and all my being."
A
soft humming noise, like the thrum of a refrigerator , could be heard
that steadily grew louder and louder until it threatened to overwhelm
everyone in the warehouse.
The
blue haze that had descended turned blinding white and everyone was
forced to close their eyes.
The
humming stopped, the sounds in the warehouse returned to normal and
one-by-one the members of the coven opened their eyes. When they did
the saw the blinding light had faded.
"It
is done. No one will be able to find this warehouse, let alone find
us, without my permission."
Fab scene! The characters really show their distinctive personalities here, especially Maggie with her eagerness to learn. :D
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DeleteI love witch stories. Great scene.
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ReplyDeleteYou truly have a way with words ! Its as if I was standing right there with them (behind Sebastian)
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DeleteI love Betty, she sounds very trustworthy and authoritative, like the mother hen and saviour of the group. I like how you set it up to look like that, with everyone following her lead. Perfect primer for a possible abuse of power, I'd say :D
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