Thank you for all the comments on yesterday’s
entry, D is for Demons. I continue the A-Z today with;
E is for Elizabeth
Bathory
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A Hungarian
Countess in the 16th- 17th Century, Bathory is publically
known as the Blood Countess: the most prolific female serial killer in history.
Convicted of killing 80 victims, though rumoured to have killed 650.
What the public
don’t know is that Bathory’s crimes continued after her “death” on 21st
August, 1614. Having been turned into a vampire 20 years previously – when she
was in her early thirties – Bathory continued her horrific ritual of killing
virgins, and bathing in their blood.
Slipping in and
out of time, Bathory avoided capture by The Ancile until the Victorian era,
when she was taken down by a team led by Abigail Van Helsing, granddaughter of
famous vampire hunter Abraham Van Helsing.
The following is
an account of Bathory’s neutralization by Abigail Van Helsing and the team of Suppressors
she led.
Narrated by: Abigail Van Helsing, London Unit
Suppressor, January 26th,
1855.
Transcribed by: Edmond Beecham, London Unit
Scholar, January 26th,
1855.
It
is done. Bathory is neutralised at last. The menace that has plagued my beloved
home of London is dead. By my hands.
The
battle was fierce and took all of the skill and experience I’ve accumulated in
the last ten years.
The
team and I eventually tracked Bathory down to her lair, which was – rather than
at her mansion – hidden in a disused coal mine.
We
thought, as we were attacking during the daylight hours the threat would be
minimal.
We
were wrong.
Alongside
the deadly traps, we had anticipated, we discovered Bathory was awake.
Due
to her advanced age she did not need the same level of sleep as younger
vampires do. Although we found her resting, she was fully conscious; which
vampires usually aren’t during the day.
Upon
detecting us, Bathory immediately engaged us in battle. We were evenly matched
in terms of strength, stamina and agility, thanks to the Order’s own augmented
abilities. However, Bathory had the advantage of flight, so that even with
crossbows, getting a hit on her was difficult. Let alone with mêlée weapons.
Eventually,
we managed to weaken her enough that she became grounded. What we hadn’t
counted on though was, as a last precaution, Bathory transformed from human
form to a more bat-like feral form. Now her strength far surpassed ours, and
even outnumbering her three to one, she overwhelmed us. Both of my colleagues
were mortally wounded, and I thought we were going to meet our death in that
dark, desolate mine.
Bathory
had me pinned to the ground, her teeth about ready to rip my neck to shreds,
when the words of my dear grandfather came back to me. “A vampire’s ultimate
weakness is its desire for companionship,” he’d told me once during my training
in the Order.
An
idea formed in my mind, and I uttered the words that could seal my fate. “Spare
me and make me your progeny. Imagine having the granddaughter of Abraham Van
Helsing as your fledgling.”
My
statement was enough to feed both Bathory’s desire for companionship and her
need for notoriety, and she released me from her grip and eased back a little.
It was all the chance I needed. I sprang to my feet, pushed her backwards and
plunged my dagger into her heart.
She
was done.
After
the proper protocol for disposing of a vampire – beheading the creature and
then burning the body, and sprinkling the ashes in an east flowing river – was
carried out, I went back to the headquarters and contemplated Bathory’s demise.
In
the end, it was her remaining human instincts – her desire for companionship –
that bought about her death.
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Check back tomorrow for F is for Fae, and if you're
interested please check out my personal blog's forth entry E is for EastEnders.
Awesome. I felt like I was in a movie. Great descriptions, Clare!
ReplyDeleteAww yay! Thank you Cassie, that's a lovely thing to say! <3
DeleteShe sounds like a piece of work! Never heard of that method of disposing of vampires before.
ReplyDeleteShe was. I watched a film about her, starring Anna Friel, and it was quite gruesome. Ah, that would be because I made it up for this story's universe. ;)
DeleteShe was one scary-ass bat shit crazy bitch. Can't believe she killed close to 650 people! That's insanity. You did a great job on twisting the facts for your story.
ReplyDeleteThanks Jen! She is rather frightening, isn't she?
DeleteA tough fight but in the end good prevailed. I must say I am becoming fan of your writing. It's riveting. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Al, that's very nice of you. Glad you're enjoying my A-Z.
DeleteYay she killed Elizabeth. The real Elizabeth Bathory has a very bloody history as well.
ReplyDeleteShe did indeed. Very scary woman.
DeleteHello, Clare! Ooo, she's one crazy scary lady. But not at all a lady. Creepy!
ReplyDeleteHappy A to Z-ing! from Laura Marcella @ Wavy Lines
Hey Laura, thanks for dropping in. Very creepy lady indeed.
DeleteGreat writing. Bathory is scary.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Michael! :D
DeleteKilled that many people and bathing in blood? Wow-what a creepy countess. Yikes! We all crave companionship, don't we.
ReplyDeleteYeah, very creepy. But yes, companionships is a basic human need.
DeleteLove how you describe this, but yikes, wouldn't want to meet her.
ReplyDeleteGood luck with the challenge.
Cheryl
http://www.thebusymomsdaily.com/2013/04/blogging-from-to-z-challenge-letter-e.html
Thanks for dropping in Cheryl. Yeah, I don't think I'd want to meet her, either.
DeleteIs this true? I don't know much about this type of thing, but I thought this stuff was all made up. Strange and scary to think there really were (and are?) people like this.
ReplyDeleteYeah, 90 % of it is true. Scary, isn't it. Though she was never actually tried or convicted of her crimes. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Elizabeth_B%C3%A1thory
DeleteWould NOT want to meet her in a dark alley or abandoned coal mine. That would freak me out.
ReplyDeleteRight! it would be a frightening experience, that's for sure.
DeleteAwesome! I did a whole week on Elizabeth Bathory a while back. Great fun.
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Tim Brannan
The Other Side and The Witch
Red Sonja: She-Devil with a Sword
The Freedom of Nonbelief
Thanks Timothy. Oh, I'll have to check it out, I've been a fan of Bathory since I was about eleven!
DeleteHere you go!
DeleteBathory at the Other Side
Thanks Timothy, I'll bookmark that link! :D
DeleteVery cool. I could totally see that as a type of vampire hunting steampunk age story. :)
ReplyDeleteHeh, I don't know how I missed all these comments. Sorry.
DeleteThank you, Christine. Ah, now you've got me thinking about an Ancile story set in the Victorian Era! :D
These are so cool! I could read a compilation of these entries alone. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Carrie! It's certainly something I'm contemplating. :D
DeleteAh, the good old dark ages! What would we do without all that depravity/poor-value of life? I mean, the history books would be snore-worthy. What? Some are, you say? *gasp*
ReplyDeleteLOL Indeed, which is why a little fabrication is needed now and again! ;)
DeleteGreat story, but in Bathory's defense I would add that she may not have killed 600 people: http://www.elizabethbathory.net/Countess-Bathory-s-case.html
ReplyDeleteBut who knows.
Very interesting, thanks for the link, I'll have to look into it. :D
DeleteI missed this entry on "E" day - that was an awesome read! I would like to hear the full saga of the bigger story. Excellent post!
ReplyDeleteCharlie @ The Semi-Retired Gamer
Thanks Charlie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Who knows if Bathory's story will make it into my actual novel ... perhaps one day. ;)
DeleteBeing interested in vampires I've always been fascinated by this story and I love your take on her.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robin, I'm glad you liked my take on her. I've been fascinated by Bathory since my teens.
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